If you had the choice between flying and having super strength, which would you pick, and why?

• If I'll that situation, I'll pick flying skill. = If I were in that situation, I would pick the ability to fly. Why: “If I’ll” corrected to conditional “If I were”; “flying skill” rephrased to “the ability to fly” for natural phrasing.

• Because if i get that skill, I don`t feel anoyed about traffic gem. = Because if I had that skill, I wouldn’t feel annoyed about traffic jams. Why: “if i get” corrected to “if I had” for conditional tense; “don’t feel anoyed” corrected to “wouldn’t feel annoyed”; “traffic gem” corrected to “traffic jams.”

• plus I can feel freedom and thrill when i fly. = Plus, I could feel freedom and thrill when I fly. Why: “can” corrected to “could” for conditional tense; capitalized “I.”