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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   sziwon4    µî·ÏÀÏ   2025-12-08
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  My country has many popular places. The place that I think the most popular is ¡®Haeundae beach¡¯ in Busan. Busan is the second largest city in Korea. And it is a harbor city. There are lots of places surrounded by ocean. Every year, many foreigh visitors come to the Haeundae Beach. There they can enjoy the view of the beach, swim on the waves, eat variety of dishes. Luxurious hotels and local restuarants are prepared for the tourists. If you have a chance, you can go there and enjoy your holiday!
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My country has many popular places.
The place that I think the most popular is ‘Haeundae beach’ in Busan. I think the most popular place is ‘Haeundae beach’ in Busan
Busan is the second largest city in Korea.
And it is a harbor city. There are lots of places surrounded by ocean.
Every year, many foreigh visitors come to the Haeundae Beach.
There they can enjoy the view of the beach, swim on the waves,
eat variety of dishes.
Luxurious hotels and local restuarants are prepared for the tourists.
If you have a chance, you can go there and enjoy your holiday!

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