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  What is your favorite outfit? I liked unicqe and colorful clothes when i was teenager. My best Item in my past was uniqe style shoes made by thick rope. It was about around 500 dollars 17 years ago. very expencive. But I don`t have interest about outfit now. So. I`m just shopping simply and cheap clothes in a online market
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What is your favorite outfit?

  • I liked unicqe and colorful clothes when i was teenager. = I liked unique and colorful clothes when I was a teenager. why: Correct spelling ("unicqe" → "unique"), capitalize "I," add article "a" before "teenager."

  • My best Item in my past was uniqe style shoes made by thick rope. = My best item in the past was unique-style shoes made of thick rope. why: Lowercase "item," correct spelling ("uniqe" → "unique"), add hyphen for "unique-style," use "made of" instead of "made by."

  • It was about around 500 dollars 17 years ago. very expencive. = It cost about 500 dollars 17 years ago. It was very expensive. why: Simplify phrasing ("about around" → "about"), correct spelling ("expencive" → "expensive"), make it a complete sentence.

  • But I don`t have interest about outfit now. = But I don’t have any interest in outfits now. why: Correct contraction ("don’t"), add "any," change preposition ("interest in" instead of "interest about"), pluralize "outfits."

  • So. I`m just shopping simply and cheap clothes in a online market. = So, I just shop for simple and cheap clothes in an online market. why: Fix phrasing ("shopping simply" → "shop for simple"), add article ("an online market"), adjust word order for natural flow.

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