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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   rudrl88    µî·ÏÀÏ   2015-11-11
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  Last Saturday my son¡¯s school festival was held at their school. They go to the same school. Because my wife is an elementary school teacher and she can¡¯t have a day off on weekdays, I had a day off and went to the school. When I came to my first son¡¯s class and saw him, I could recognized that he didn¡¯t welcome me that much because he becomes enough old not to need father¡¯s coming to a school festival. After watching his performance of a short play, I moved into another class for my second. When I came there, I realized that he was looking for me among parents. Unexpectedly my second son¡¯s teacher asked me to give a speech after their festival. I felt a little bit nervous because I¡¯m not a good speaker moreover it was a public speech in front of the class even though they are just kids. Actually I haven¡¯t had a lot of chance to make a public speech like most of Korean adults. Now I don¡¯t remembered what I spoke in front of only over 30 kids. After that, a mother of my second son¡¯s friends who I have some acquaintance reminded me that I made a mistake that I introduced myself to my second sons¡¯ class ¡°Father of my first son¡¯s name¡±. How could I be confused about my sons¡¯ names? I think it is due to lack of confidence in making a public speech. How wonderful is it to be a good public speaker like Steve Jobs?
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Last Saturday my son’s school festival was held at their school. They go to the same school. Because my wife is an elementary school teacher and she can’t have a day off on weekdays, I had a day off and went to the school. When I came to my first son’s class and saw him, I could recognized that he didn’t welcome me that much because he becomes enough old not to need father’s coming to a school festival. After watching his performance of a short play, I moved into another class for my second. When I came there, I realized that he was looking for me among parents. Unexpectedly my second son’s teacher asked me to give a speech after their festival. I felt a little bit nervous because I’m not a good speaker moreover it was a public speech in front of the class even though they are just kids. Actually I haven’t had a lot of chance to make a public speech like most of Korean adults. Now I don’t remembered what I spoke in front of only over 30 kids. After that, a mother of my second son’s friends who I have some acquaintance reminded me that I made a mistake that I introduced myself to my second sons’ class “Father of my first son’s name”. How could I be confused about my sons’ names? I think it is due to lack of confidence in making a public speech. How wonderful is it to be a good public speaker like Steve Jobs?

 

CORRECTIONS:

            There was a festival in the campus of my children last saturday. All of my sons study in the same school.  My wife is an elementary school teacher and she can’t have a day off on weekdays, I had a day off and went to the school. When I came to my first son’s class and saw him, I realized  that he didn’t welcome me that much because he became matured enough to handle his own things and activities on this particular special event.  After I watched his performance in a short play, I went to the classroom of my second child. When I came there, I realized that he was looking for me among the crowd. Unexpectedly my second son’s teacher asked me to give a speech after their festival. I felt a little bit nervous because I was not a good speaker ,moreover it was a public speech in front of the class ,even though they were just kids. Actually, I haven’t had a lot of chance to make a public speech like most of Korean adults. Now I couldn't remembered what I spoke in front of  thirty kids. After that, a mother of my second son’s friend who was also my  acquaintance reminded me that I made a mistake. I introduced myself to my second sons’ class  and I mentioned the wrong name. It should supposed to be the name of my second son but instead I got the full name of my first born lad. How could I be confused with my sons' names and interchanged them with one another? I think it is due to lack of confidence in making a public speech. How wonderful it is  to be a good public speaker like Steve Jobs?

 

 

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