제 목   The importance of religion    상 태  
   작성자   burgling    등록일   2016-04-11
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  I'm not the religious person at all. Actually, I don't much care about it. What's more, I even think many dark sides of human history have been derived from religions. So many people passed away under the name of Jesus, Alah. It's not quite different nowaday as well. However, as humble and unstable being, we need some shelterd from the harsh reality. My mother can't get through so many hardships without her strong faith on Buddah. Our ancestors depended on the number of foreigners who helped our poor nation just because of their strong faith on Jesus Christ's virtue, mercy on humbler people. Even after henious terror attack by ISIS, we can see how people overcome and try to accept refugees based on the spritual belief of human being. Sooner or later, all the being will be perished since we are all destined to die someday. But I can sure those kind of values shall never fade away forever.
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I'm not the religious person at all. Actually, I don't much care about it. What's more, I even think many dark sides of human history have been derived from religions.  =Actually, I don't much care about it. What's more, I even think many dark sides of human history that have been derived from religions.So many people passed away under the name of Jesus, Alah. It's not quite different nowaday as well.

However, as humble and unstable being, we need some shelterd from the harsh reality.=However, as humble and unstable being, we need some shelter from the harsh reality. My mother can't get through so many hardships without her strong faith on Buddah. Our ancestors depended on the number of foreigners who helped our poor nation just because of their strong faith on Jesus Christ's virtue, mercy on humbler people. Even after henious terror attack by ISIS, we can see how people overcome and try to accept refugees based on the spritual belief of human being.

Sooner or later, all the being will be perished since we are all destined to die someday. But I can sure those kind of values shall never fade away forever.

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Very well said! Superb opinion! 
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