there is much less to say that the trip to India was far and away the ever-lasting memery = memory of my adventure i had in my life. if you were wondering why i did go there, that was because of a book about Mother Teresa i came aross = across at a book store the other day. it caught my eyes right off the bat and it spoke to me you don't want miss me. = it spoke to me saying "you don't want miss me".  So i ended up of buying that and i was beside myself with happy. = i was happy. it was totally worth it. it keeps me engaged everytime i read and finally made me come to India where mother teresa has devoted her entire life to people in need. i went to India with a view for voluntieering at Mother teresa house. = Mother Teresa's  house. but, it turned out that it was the other way around. the patients teached me a lot and changed me much. For one, they helped me open my eyes to needy people. even though i helped them on wth = with clothes, feed them and wash their body, they cleared all of the dusts off my mind. All of the images and people stick in my mind. I am sure it will last forever until the last day of my life.

I must say that your homework is very touching. It impressed me a lot. ^^

NOTE:

1. ) Always CAPITALIZED the first letter of you the first word of your sentence.

2.) Capitalized all the first letter of the PROPER NOUNS. Example: Mother Teresa.

3.) If you are writing about taking ownership, write the correct way of possessive form by adding ('s). Example: Mother teresa house. = Mother Teresa's  house.

4.) Be mindful with your spelling.