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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   dlagkscjd    µî·ÏÀÏ   2016-06-01
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  I am planning on a bike trip to China in the middle of this year. i've been meaning to do it but something kept cominging up for a while. So i had to put if off. However, it's high time to take a crack of it. There is no more of holding if off. Otherwise, i will end up of passing up this great opportunity. I think it will take 3 months, give or take a few weeks. I'm SO stocked to think of that travel because this bike trip will be filled with a full of exciting, entertaning and wonderful experiences. i will meet all folks of people over there and share visions, views and thoughts with each other. And there will be a chance of having a flat tire or getting mugged, God forbid, but i can learn from that, too. There is no a dull moment for sure.
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I am planning on a bike trip to China in the middle of this year. i've been meaning to do it but something kept cominging= coming up for a while. So i had to put if off. However, it's high time to take a crack of it. There is no more of holding if off. Otherwise, i will end up of passing up this great opportunity. I think it will take 3 months, give or take a few weeks. I'm SO stocked = stuck to think of that travel because this bike trip will be filled with a full of exciting, entertaining, = this bike trip will be full of excitement, entertanment and wonderful experiences. i will meet all folks of people I will meet all the folks over there and share visions, views and thoughts with each other. And there will be a chance of having a flat tire or getting mugged, God forbid, but i can learn from that, too. There is no a dull moment for sure.

 

NOTE:

1.) The pronoun "I" is always capitalized. Example: I've been meaning to do, I will meet all folks and so on.

2.) this bike trip will be filled with a full of exciting, entertaining, = this bike trip will be full of excitement,

--- This statement is redundant because of the words: full and filled. Make the words exciting and entertaining in its NOUN form: EXCITEMENT and ENTERTAINMENT since you said FULL OF. Unless otherwise you'll say...this bike trip will be so exciting and entertaining then you can use its ADJECTIVE form. ^^

3.)  i will meet all folks of people =  I will meet all the folks

---This statement is also redundant. Folks means people. ^^

 

Still, you did a great job.

 

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