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  first, we have to reduce to use things that contain chemical composition such as a shampoo or detergent et cetera. because, using lots of chemical composition is main cause of earth pollution. second, people need to take public transportation as much as possible. because, when we take a car, car is emitting much carbon in the air. carbon is also main cause of earth pollution. so we have to reduce to take our own cars. i think third is the most important method of prevent earth pollution. it is we dont have to thoughtlessly throw away garbage anywhere if everyone dont throw away garbage on the street ,i am sure earth will be clean. so we have to strive for preventing earth pollution. i felt over searching the data, it doesnt need lots of efforts for preventing earth pollution. so i thought i would try to practice it first.
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First, we have to reduce to use = using things that contain = contains chemical composition
such as a shampoo or detergent et cetera. = shampoo, detergent, etcetera.
because, using  = It's because using / Using lots of chemical composition is main  = the main cause of earth = the earth pollution.

Second, people need to take public  = the public transportation as much as possible. because, when  = When we take  = drive a car, car = the car is emitting much carbon in the air.
Carbon is also main  = the main cause of earth pollution.
so we have to reduce to take  = driving our own cars.

i think third is the most important method of prevent earth pollution.
it is we dont have to thoughtlessly throw away garbage anywhere = 
 Finally, I think the most important method in preventing pollution is that we should not thoughtlessly throw away garbage anywhere.
I
f everyone dont  = will not throw away garbage on the street, I am sure earth  = the earth will be clean.
So / Therefore we have to strive for preventing  = preventing the earth pollution.

i felt over searching the data, = I think / In my opinion, it doesnt need lots of efforts for preventing = in preventing the earth pollution.
So i thought i would try to practice it first.

   ÀÌÀü±Û my homework.
   ´ÙÀ½±Û What's your opinion about the paragraphs?