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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   cellica73    µî·ÏÀÏ   2016-09-08
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  I think people progress. So price is up and people have to learn money more. So all parents are working. Luckily my mother is not working. So I can loved for my parents more. So I'm still deciding. 1.I will be a great mom. 2.I will be a great idol. What is better thing? However family can't together much time. So I am very sad. I want to play with my parents. But my father is play with me much more than other house So I love him. and I'm very proud. But nowadays my father more want play a phone game or watching a tv program to phone. and in room! So it impress to me contract interruption. However again, I don't like this phenomenon.
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I think people progress.= I think people have progressed.
So price is up and people have to learn money more. = The cost of living is expensive and people have to earn money more.
So all parents are working. = So, almost of the parents are working.
Luckily my mother is not working.
So I can loved for my parents more. = So I can be loved by my parents more.
So I'm still deciding.
1.I will be a great mom.
2.I will be a great idol.
= So I'm still deciding whether I should be a great mom or  be a great idol in  the future.
What is better thing? = Which is the better thing?
 

However family can't together much time. = Meanwhile, my family can't have much time together .So I am very sad.
I want to play with my parents.

But my father is play with me much more than other house. =But my father plays with me much more than other children in our neighbors.
So I love him.
and I'm very proud.
= So I love him and I'm very proud.
But nowadays my father more want play a phone game or watching a tv program to phone.
and in room!
= But nowadays my father wants to play games on his phone more  or watch  a TV program on his phone  in the room!

So it impress to me contract interruption. = It urges me to interrupt him.
However again, I don't like this phenomenon. =Again, I don't like this phenomenon.

 

 

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