I am really happy to have a class with you, Emyca~!
I know I have to write shortly. So I will try~

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What's the best place to visit in Dublin, Ireland?
I would like to recommend you to go to the Phoenix Park and to some castles. I know that you are interesting interested of history museum and castle in the history of museums and castles.
But I just want to tell you about information of the Phoenix Park. That park is the largest park in Europe. So you can see the huge landscape and
greenery sightseeing. And you can also find many deers like Bambi. They are so cute!!! If you bring some carrots, they will like it and they may come to you. I can't choose from one of the castles or museums in Ireland because one of reasons is that I don't like to go (or I'm not interested in it.) Second, Also, you can search on the internet to get some information about those places. That will be better than me telling you about it. Anyway, you have to visit to Phoenix park someday if you can come to Ireland.
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Hi Yohan! ^_^ Thanks for answering the homework question, I really appreciate it. Someday, I hope I can visit those places in Ireland that you've mentioned. I'm glad that you're one of my students now. Hopefully, we'll have a great class together. See you in class~!

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Blue - wrong word, sentence or phrase

Red - right word, sentence or phrase

~ T. Emyca :)