제 목   4th composition    상 태  
   작성자   ikoreatrade    등록일   2016-10-13
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  The company that we had visited at the last time in China was connected with me for the fabric. In my old age, the first cargo was shipped from China after 2 weeks from my business trip. But I had been no any knowledges and informations about the fabric at that time. I had only one piece of sample for the fabric and I did'nt know what are carded and combed fabric. There are "The heaven help those who help themselves" in the Korean adage. I was like such that. Really I was an ignorant person but my LORD God was wisdom's God. He prepared to send a person heling me in business and supplied me knowledges and informations about fabrics and clients through him. He the LORD had made me passed over to overcome the problem of claims from clients under his supports even though I was stupid about fabrics. Beacause there were many accidents in the quality of fabrics. For example, 3 containers among 10 containers had been happened claims from customers in Korea. Unless the LORD builds the house, its builders labor in vain. Unless the LORD watches over the city, the watchman stand guard in vain.(Psalms 127:1) I think what It is the grace of the LORD God that I am here today. The LORD is my shepherd, I shall not be in want. He makes me lie down in green pastures, he leads me beside quiet waters.(Psalms 23:1-2)
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The company that we had visited at the last time in China was connected with me for the fabric. = The company that we visited last time in China was connected with me for the fabric. In my old age, the first cargo was shipped from China after 2 weeks from my business trip. =  When I was a bit younger, the first cargo was shipped from China 2 weeks after my business trip. But I had been no any knowledges and informations about the fabric at that time = But I had no any knowledge and information about the fabric at that time. I had only one piece of sample for the fabric and I did'nt know what are carded and combed fabric. There are "The heaven help those who help themselves" in the Korean adage.= There is a Korean adage that says, "The heaven helps those who help themselves", I was like such that. Really I was an ignorant person but my LORD God was wisdom's God. = I was really an ignorant person but my lord has wisdom. He prepared to send a person heling me in business and supplied me knowledges and informations about fabrics and clients through him. =He planned to send a person to help me in business and supplied me knowledge and information about fabrics and clients through him. He the LORD had made me passed over to overcome the problem of claims from clients under his supports even though I was stupid about fabrics. = He, the LORD made me overcome the problem about clients' claims under his supports, even though I was stupid about fabrics.  Beacause there were many accidents in= about the quality of fabrics. For example, 3 containers among 10 containers had been happened claims from customers in Korea. = were claimed from customers in Korea.
"Unless the LORD builds the house, its builders labor in vain. Unless the LORD watches over the city, the watchman stand guard in vain.(Psalms 127:1) I think what It is the= because of the grace of the LORD God, that I am here today. The LORD is my shepherd, I shall not be in want. He makes me lie down in green pastures, he leads me beside quiet waters.(Psalms 23:1-2)"

 

*Mr. Ha, don't put 's' on knowledge and information.

*I agree with you Mr. Ha. God should be involve in all businesses that we should do.
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