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  Discussing our university¡¯s scholarship policy without a doubt would have to be one of the most stressful time. When I was in university, I belong to our university¡¯s student council with my friend, Yoon. One day, we had a conference about our university¡¯ scholarship policy and then had an argument who would be appropriate students to receive scholarships. My friend, Yoon had a different opinion about our university¡¯ scholarship policy compared to my perception. When we had a meeting with our entire council member, I advocated that the scholarship should be provided to poor students. However, Yoon insisted that the scholarship should be given to students who had good grades. According to his view, it has been enforced the university¡¯s policy so it can¡¯t be changed. But I disagreed with his point and telling him that we should convert that policy. Finally, after our conference, Yoon apologized to me that his opinion was not proper. He admitted my opinion about our university¡¯ policy was way better. The clear reason for this is that, It is important for poor pupils to get a scholarship from university and then it would help them to concentrate on their lessons and dissertation. At the end of our argument, we had a good relationship because of our consensus.
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Discussing our university’s scholarship policy without a doubt would have to be one of the most stressful time.

When I was in university, I belong to our university’s student council with my friend, Yoon. One day, we had a conference about our university’ scholarship policy and then had an argument who would be appropriate students to receive scholarships. My friend, Yoon had a different opinion about our university’ scholarship policy compared to my perception.

When we had a meeting with our entire council member, I advocated that the scholarship should be provided to poor students. However, Yoon insisted that the scholarship should be given to students who had good grades. According to his view, it has been enforced the university’s policy so it can’t be changed. = According to him, it has been enforced as the university’s policy so it can’t be changed. But I disagreed with his point and telling him that we should convert that policy= But I disagreed with his point telling him that we should change that policy.
Finally, after our conference, Yoon apologized to me that his opinion was not proper. = Finally, after our conference, Yoon apologized to me, saying his opinion was not proper. He admitted that my opinion about our university’s policy was way better. The clear reason for this is that, it is important for poor pupils to get a scholarship from university and then it would help them to concentrate on their lessons and dissertation. At the end of our argument, we had a good relationship because of our consensus.

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