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  umm...depend on money, but if I gonna be a rich like Mansour or Bill Gates,, I just try to keep my money, and help other poor person, usually I want to be volunteer work, but now don't have enough time usually I have to do working in evening, that all I just want to spend my life safely
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umm...depend on money, but if I gonna be a rich like Mansour or Bill Gates,,
I just try to keep my money, and help other poor person, usually I want to be volunteer work, but now don't have enough time usually I have to do working in evening, that all I just want to spend my life safely

Correction/Improvement:

umm...It depends on how much money I would receive., but if I would be rich like Mansour or Bill Gates,
I would just try to keep my money, and help other poor people. Actually, I want to be a volunteer in a voluntary work, but now I don't have enough time. Usually, I have to work in the evening, that's all, I just want to spend my life safely.

 

Comment:

=> Thank you for doing your homework Mr. Jae. Stay nice to the poor! Keep up the good work! :)

 

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