What relation do you have with person - INTRO
What are your first memories of this person - BODY 1 (3 sentences)
How often you see this person – BODY 2
Explain why you admire this person.


My maternal uncle without a doubt would have to be the person I admire.
My uncle, my mother’ younger brother, is 40 years old (and) currently working as a middle school English teacher in my hometown. He has been working for the past 15 years. = He has been working there for the past 15 years.

When I was little, I spent my free time on (in) my maternal grandmother’ home because my parents have lee time to take care of me. =  When I was little, I spent my free time in my maternal grandmother’s home because my parents have lee time to take care of me. At that time, my uncle usually looked after me and we often enjoy playing basketball or going to the gym. So I still remember a variety of outdoor activities with him.
When I was a child, we met once or twice a week. However, at present we can (only) see each other once or twice a month because he is very busy with his work and I have less leisure time than ever before. Despite our busy daily situations, we try to keep in touch with each other using cellular phone whenever we have extra time.
There are a couple of reasons why I admire my uncle.
He is not only a helpful person but a good mentor as well, who shows me positive ways and guide me in my distressed time. Talking to him is a soothing experience and the advice he provides is always attractive and full of morality. I have learned many positive attitudes and creative thinking from him.