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   작성자   power5899    등록일   2016-12-21
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  It is a main event for me to get a job this year. by earning money myself, I become independent without parents supporting and I can everything that I want to I don't need to care parent's worry and my allowance. but It doesn't mean that I am wasteful of money. and I also can live my own house which is rented one room. but I can live independent without parents supporting and I give parents to allowance. by working, I try to figure out what I want to be. When I was university student, I didn't have any working experience and I didn't know what I want. now days, It is also difficult topic for me but I have experience working environment, Logistics industry and how to communicate with people and so on. These experience give me to remove wrong answer of my life that I don't want to do job. but It is still complicated and difficult to find my life goal and work sometimes give me to be stressed. But I try to learn everything and figure out what is my life goal.
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It is a main event for me to get a job this year. = Being employed this year is a milestone in my career.  by earning money myself, I become independent = I'm now independent because I can earn my own money, without parents supporting = without any support from my parents.  and I can everything that I want to I don't need to care parent's worry and my allowance. = I can buy everything that I want without worrying about asking money from my parents, but It doesn't mean that I am wasteful of money. = But I make sure that I always spend my money wisely. and I also can live my own house which is rented one room. = I'm now living on my own and I can afford to pay my own rent. but I can live independent without parents supporting and I give parents to allowance. by working, I try to figure out what I want to be. = But I'm still trying to figure out what I want to be. When I was still a university student, I didn't have any working experience and I didn't know what I want. now days = nowadays It is also difficult topic for me but I have experience working environment, = It's still difficult but because I now have some working experience like for example Logistics industry = logistics and also how to communicate with people. These experience give me to remove wrong answer of my life that I don't want to do job. = These work experiences helped me to change my perspective in this life. but It is still complicated and difficult to find my life goal and work sometimes give me to be stressed. = I still have some hardships in my life achieving my goals. I sometimes feel stressed with my job But I try to learn everything and figure out what is my real life goal.

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Hi Sunwoo,

It's really nice that you always give your best in doing your homework. ^^

Just always be noted that you should apply all the things that we have learned in our class most especially grammar composition and also practice putting proper punctuations, suffixes, prefixes and lastly correct articles.

Thank you so much! ^

Keep it up!

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