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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   cellica73    µî·ÏÀÏ   2017-02-13
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  Important for me... is mommy(and dad)! She is very important.^^ For everyone! Yes. Everyone love her and can feel important. It's so fair. She is very important for me. She only can advice for me. I love that advice. Sometimes, it's bad.^^ Sometimes splendid! So she is IMPORTANT for me. My phone is important to. Because I can play game, phone call, and use maill with this, So phone is very important! And when emergency time, I can call to 112 or 119 or mommy! So very IMPORTANT. Last important thing is award. Award can make my heart to happy. And I want to get award. When my award goes to refregirator, I am much much happy! It's great. That three thing is important thing for me. I love them. And I can't live with out mommy! So mommy(dad) is the best. 26 sentences.
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Important for me... is mommy(and dad)! She is very important.^^ For everyone! Yes. Everyone love her and can feel important. = loves

It's so fair. She is very important for me. She only can advice for me. = She is very important to me and she is the only one who can advise me.

I love that advice. Sometimes, it's bad.^^ Sometimes splendid! So she is IMPORTANT for me.= to me
My phone is important to.= important,too

Because I can play game, phone call, and use maill with this, = can play games, make phone calls and write emails with my phone.

So phone is very important! And when emergency time, I can call to 112 or 119 or mommy! = when there is an emergency

So very IMPORTANT.
Last important thing is award. Award can make my heart to happy. = the award. ......make my heart so happy

And I want to get award. When my award goes to refregirator, I am much much happy! It's great.= get an award. When I receive awards I stick them on the door of our refrigerator.
That three thing is important thing for me. I love them. = These are the 3 important things for me.

And I can't live with out mommy! So mommy(dad) is the best.

Good job!!^^

26 sentences.

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